Wednesday, January 9, 2013

ODE- To mydear Dormintory

To my dear Dormitory,
OH! Dormitory, how far away you are when I want to be in your cozy warm body. I have to walk all the way up the hill to meet you. When I wish to be with you, I have to go through a huge obstacle in the freezing cold to be with you.





OH! Dormitory. How Sweet you are. You have food and beds and my precious friends in you. You make bread, food and milk. You have a cafeteria and beds in you that are waiting for me. Oh dormitory, how sweet you are.




OH! Dormitory How big you are. I can see you from the D building C building. I can see you with one glance and with love you are staring back at me. Your huge size and pretty windows, which one of them is mine, is staring back at me.

OH! Dormitory, How noisy you are. You ring the morning song so loud and make me wake up. You ring many times to tell me lots of things. You yell at me to come back to you when I leave you for the D building.

oh! Dormitory, how wonderful and sweet you are. And how Jelous and noisy you are. YOU make me happy and YOU make me sleepy.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Gun Hee,

    You did a great job with your ode. I like how you used personifications to describe the dormitory. Keep up the good work!

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  2. Hi!
    Great ode to the dormitory! It really feels like that the dormitory is an animate object. It is great that you like your dormitory in KMLA. Keep writing good posts~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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