Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Argumentative essay

         Using fake names to sign up for on line websites should not be allowed. Some people may disagree with this idea. They put forward this idea because they think that one's own private information is more important. However using our own name for on-line websites is important. Here are some reasons why.

         Nowadays, there is a lot of criticism about writing bad things anonymously. And that is true. People who do bad things anonymously should be criticized.

         First of all, it makes people feel depressed. Criticizing comments about some particular person, it makes that person get so much stress. Many people commit suicide because of this stress and the people who commit suicide are public persons like an actor, a singer and etc. For example there is an actor called 최진실.

         second, we should protect personal information. People say we should not use our own name because we should protect one's identity. However, it's not right to wish for their own identity to be safe when they are bullying another person.

         Thirdly, there is a lot of bad comment that have to be lessened. Just because the person is famous and have a lot of fans and anti fans at the same time. it's not right to make people feel bad. In that case, nobody wants to be bullied, so nobody would want to be a actor or a singer. If we make the people use their own name while writing anything, bad things might get lessened.

          Lastly, real name system for internet helps the cyber be a nice, clean place. If it's full of  bad words and criticizing will the cyber look nice? NO! Like I said in the last reason,    if we use our own name to write something bad comments will disappear slowly, and the cyber will look better if the real name policy is widely spread.

        For these reasons, real name system for internet is really important. Connecting with cyber bullying real name system for internet is a needed and most important thing. So it's right for us to do the real name system.

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