Argumentative essay

         Using fake names to sign up for on line websites should not be allowed. Some people may disagree with this idea. They put forward this idea because they think that one's own private information is more important. However using our own name for on-line websites is important. Here are some reasons why.

         Nowadays, there is a lot of criticism about writing bad things anonymously. And that is true. People who do bad things anonymously should be criticized.

         First of all, it makes people feel depressed. Criticizing comments about some particular person, it makes that person get so much stress. Many people commit suicide because of this stress and the people who commit suicide are public persons like an actor, a singer and etc. For example there is an actor called 최진실.

         second, we should protect personal information. People say we should not use our own name because we should protect one's identity. However, it's not right to wish for their own identity to be safe when they are bullying another person.

         Thirdly, there is a lot of bad comment that have to be lessened. Just because the person is famous and have a lot of fans and anti fans at the same time. it's not right to make people feel bad. In that case, nobody wants to be bullied, so nobody would want to be a actor or a singer. If we make the people use their own name while writing anything, bad things might get lessened.

          Lastly, real name system for internet helps the cyber be a nice, clean place. If it's full of  bad words and criticizing will the cyber look nice? NO! Like I said in the last reason,    if we use our own name to write something bad comments will disappear slowly, and the cyber will look better if the real name policy is widely spread.

        For these reasons, real name system for internet is really important. Connecting with cyber bullying real name system for internet is a needed and most important thing. So it's right for us to do the real name system.

Response essay after watching 'BRAVE'

      I've watched the movie "BRAVE" I have watched that movie in Korean. In Korean it's called, "Merida and the magical forest" I have seen it before and I wasn't excited for watching it again. If you can see, Merida is a fantasy movie and the plot is about a girl and her mother's discord. The huge discord causes Merida to change her mom, the queen into a bear. However, in the end they happen to make up with each other. So, the bear becomes the queen again. The movie shows Merida willing to make her fate be true.It was quite a moving story.

     In the movie, Merida has a discord with her mother because she has her own thoughts about her fate. Although Merida has a determine thought about her fate, her mom disagrees with her thoughts. So, the princess refuses with her mother's opinion which makes her do very princess things. I agree with Merida's opinion that we should decide our own fate.

     First of all, if we can decide our own fate, we can enjoy our life. Merida enjoyed archery. She didn't enjoy her life when she was told and taught what she didn't like. Her life wasn't enjoyable. If she was told to do what she liked and allowed to play freely, she wouldn't have been rude to her mother!

     Second, if we can follow our own fate we can grow self-reliance. It's really important to be self reliable. You should be able to decide what you want to do. If you do the things that you don't want you are not willing to learn and that doesn't help anything. You should decide when and what you want to do something. Merida would have been better if she had more self reliance.

    Thirdly, it's Merida's life! After the king and the queen die, Merida has to live by herself. To do that she has to live her own life. It's not the queen or the king that will be living instead of Merida. I argue that at least Merida has enough rights to decide what she wants to do in the future.

    Lastly, everyone's fate is different. Although they are in the same family, their fates are all different. Like, although my sister and I are in the same family, what we are good at is different. Like this, although the queen and Merida are in the same family, they have different fates. The queen doesn't know Merida's fate, so, she shouldn't be able to decide Merida's life.

   To conclude, I feel that we should be able to decide our own fate, and our own life. We have to rely on each other, however one should decide one's fate by ourselves. That's the important part of our life.

Diamante Poem

Cake

Sweet Delicious

Cutting Eating Digesting

Tasty Gateau Sweet Brownie

tasting licking finishing

wonderful taste

terrific!

ODE- To mydear Dormintory

To my dear Dormitory,

OH! Dormitory, how far away you are when I want to be in your cozy warm body. I have to walk all the way up the hill to meet you. When I wish to be with you, I have to go through a huge obstacle in the freezing cold to be with you.

OH! Dormitory. How Sweet you are. You have food and beds and my precious friends in you. You make bread, food and milk. You have a cafeteria and beds in you that are waiting for me. Oh dormitory, how sweet you are.

OH! Dormitory How big you are. I can see you from the D building C building. I can see you with one glance and with love you are staring back at me. Your huge size and pretty windows, which one of them is mine, is staring back at me.

OH! Dormitory, How noisy you are. You ring the morning song so loud and make me wake up. You ring many times to tell me lots of things. You yell at me to come back to you when I leave you for the D building.

oh! Dormitory, how wonderful and sweet you are. And how Jelous and noisy you are. YOU make me happy and YOU make me sleepy.

My goals

   Every body will have their own goals. Starting a new year, 2013, I decided to make three new goals that I can achieve during GLPS camp.

   First, I decided to make a fabulous blog. For that I will first, do all of writing assignments. Next, I will post every writings as I can. Finally I will put the most interest in it as much as I can.

   Second, I will make new good friends. To achieve that, I will be nice to friends, get along with friends(room mates and classmates) And also I will not loose contract with my friends.

   Finally, I decided to be more dilligent. So I will wake up early, (before the alarm rings) and I won't be late for school. Lastly, I will write on my Diary constantly.

   That's my goal for January, 2013.

Self Introduction

Hello to everyone who visited my blog.^^ My name is Kim Gun Hee. I live in Gwangju, Korea. I am the second of three girls and it's fun having both younger and older sisters at the same time My sister studies abroad. She stays in New Zealand so when she comes to Korea she has to ide airplanes. My father collected many plants last year, so I used to see him grow plants. I grew one plant in school all by myself, and I think I'm good at it. Maybe I'm a green tumb.*^^*